Yvonne Hertzberger Wins Flash Fiction Challenge

Congratulations to Yvonne, whose entry won this week’s Indies Unlimited Flash Fiction Challenge.

The voter-selected story is recognized with a special feature here today and wins a place in our 2014 Flash Fiction Anthology, which will be published as an e-book when this year’s challenges are completed.

Without further ado, here’s the winning story:

 

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Wild donkeys
Photo by K.S. Brooks

The Donkey Curse
by Yvonne Hertzberger

I looked at the inquisitive faces of five donkeys, noses pressed against the window. Memory returned …the Gypsy woman, gesticulating, screaming. “You call my son an ass. I’ll show you an ass …”

I shook my head to clear it. My nose hit the mirror. How …? The shock made me jump so I banged my head on the roof of the car. This couldn’t be. I reached for the bottle of water in the console. Maybe that would clear my head. When I failed to grab it I see a … hoof!? Panic seized me and I … brayed? Hee haw. Five sad brays answered mine.

What’s that tantalizing scent? Grass?

Bile rose in my throat. Impossible. A flash of metal drew my eye. A medallion, somehow familiar, swayed from the mirror, its reflections mocking me.

One donkey took the door handle between its teeth and pulled it open.

I almost tumbled out but a sudden thought made me resist. What had the hag said?

“…wear around neck … seven full moons.”

The mirror broke off when I tried to get the medallion with my teeth. Thankfully it stayed on my nose. A good shake brought it over my ears.

The grass was good … I think.

I woke on the ground, ran hands through my hair. Hands? Hands! Must have been a dream. But, is that snow? Why is the mirror broken? Where did I this medallion come from? Five donkeys? Five rusting cars? Five medallions on mirrors?

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